VN - Ren'Py - Fate Won't Separate Us [v0.3 Patreon] [Raising Phallus]

A solid NTR-goofy focused game, unlike most games that have no emotions, this plays solid with MC's insecurities, and I like how it flashes as a thought in MC's head. Loved this concept!
Art is really well done!
Story doesn't seem to have a foundation yet so I wouldn't rate it so early....
Characters are well done except for the black guys! Even the side characters are good, except for the side black guys who sound really cliche and dumb to be honest.
Dialogues are good, cliche in some areas, for example you'll fall in love with my BBC...bleh...actions should speak louder than words here.
Overall, I'm really happy with the uniqueness of the progression and thought process of the creator!
Hope to see this game thrive for long!

Now, I do like a well written NTR and I think this has potential. The FEM MC is super hot, and some parts are super goofy.
But for now, the story is too short to really judge it well and how each choice well affect the story can't be seen yet.
It'll be on my radar, score might go up or down in the future.
I would rate it a 3.5, but for it's potential I'll give it a 4.

Fun and interesting premise with a crazy old man more or less trying to trick you into become a cuckold by having you do some silly tasks!
The characters all look nice and original from what I've seen. The female heroine is top tier in looks, and a redhead which is always a 10/10.
Story so far is amusing with pretty good renders. It's a slow build to the real thing, but the hallucination scenes make the wait pretty juicy!
The distortion/hallucination effects combined with text that mock the MC is a great idea that is super erotic.
I can't wait for future updates!

This game is absolute perfection. Freya is by far the greatest, hottest woman out there. The combo of great humour, the potential for some amazing NTR and the fact that Freya is so incredible, makes this easily a top 5 game for me…and it’s only at 0.2!!! Really looking forward to more more more

Looks like a great start. Good renders, sense of humour, hot love interest. Certainly focuses on NTR, but seems like it's more of a loss condition overall.

I'll be watching this one in future. Hoping the updates are kept regular.

Very good first release, I liked the idea of being an NTR with a humorous tone, it seems like it came at the right time, as the genre is a bit saturated with depressing stories. The girlfriend is very hot, I hope she is totally cheating.

It´s kind of funny. The dev knows how tu use the girl model at least. Very short on content, but it´s a 0.1 so it was obvious. It has potential to be a great game. I would suggest future scenes are "normal" and not mc having a mental breakdown. I know it makes sense now because he is insecure, but there are not actual scenes yet. So it would be good to add some. Good overall, there is not much to review so far. But I have some high expectations.

The renders are fine. It is not the best, but most definitely not horrible. I like the proportions of the girlfriend.

The premise of the story is interesting enough. There is a clear objective, which is to complete the missions in the meantime trying not to get your gf stolen.

If there are more choices in later versions so that the game don't appear too linear, it will definitely be a great game.

This game has definitely better graphic than the previous game. The current version is quite short but it has some interesting potential. The MC has some fear of not being "enough" for his girlfriend and is mentally not quite stable. I wonder if he develops into a better person who overcomes his fear or maybe the fears consume him and then realize themself. I can't wait to see how the story continues. The tags should tell you if this is something you enjoy so stay away from it if you don't feel comfortable with it